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Old 09-26-2009, 10:45 AM   #1
Mloren
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Short prose

Sometimes ideas like this go through my head. I'm going to try to write them down more.

Warning: Content is somewhat adult, a little weird and very depressing.

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Feelings

She likes it here. She feels happy and safe as she snuggles up against him, feeling his soft warmth spreading slowly through her body.
She feels his arms around her like a blanket, comforting her, shielding her from all her problems and for just a little while, she feels truly loved.
She moans quietly as she feels his hands upon her chest and holds him tightly, afraid to let go in case he is suddenly whisked away from her like a quickly fading dream.

She kisses him desperately as a single tear rolls down her cheek, somewhere deep inside she knows this cannot last and she
wants it to so badly, more than anything in the world she wants it to last. She clutches to the feeling frantically,
trying to hold on to it as it begins to fade; gray walls lap at the edge of her warmth. She wants to stay here, where it's warm and quiet,
and passion and love are all that matters.

She cries out in ecstasy as she feels him inside her, for a moment her fears are washed away on a wave of light that rises and then falls all too quickly.
Already it begins to fade, she pulls him closer, trying to make the feeling last, but it's dwindling so quickly and then suddenly it's gone...

A tear rolls down his cheek as he clutches the pillow tightly to his chest for a moment longer, then with a sigh, he wipes away his feelings and gets up to go to work.

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I wish that we were really good friends, we’d be completely inseparable.
Of course one day you’d do some little insignificant thing that upset me
and out of spite I’d have to go screw your really hot sister, just to get back at you.
You’d find out of course and in a fit of incestuous jealousy you’d hack me apart with a fire axe.
It’s a fantasy I have.
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Old 10-04-2009, 08:13 AM   #2
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Too weird for comment aye?
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I wish that we were really good friends, we’d be completely inseparable.
Of course one day you’d do some little insignificant thing that upset me
and out of spite I’d have to go screw your really hot sister, just to get back at you.
You’d find out of course and in a fit of incestuous jealousy you’d hack me apart with a fire axe.
It’s a fantasy I have.
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Old 10-12-2009, 09:07 PM   #3
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Not so much weird... think it's well written and hits the mark. You're right about it being a tad bit depressing though
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Old 10-19-2009, 11:03 PM   #4
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Can't a guy just go to work!? Women and their feelings!
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